Even within my planning before I went out shooting, I began making some adjustments from my original storyline. First, when considering the rating of my film, making me rethink how I was going to carry out the fighting scene and how gory I made it, and then secondly replacing a crowbar with a survival knife. Sadly I could not get the people I originally wanted to act as my Zombies due to time constraints, when I had the opportunity to book a camera from college, so I had to rely on my younger brother filling the space. Although I was impressed by his performance and grateful for him helping me, I still felt one of my own friends who I had originally intended to fill the role would have looked more threatening. The people I originally chose were taller and bulkier than myself, which would have given a greater sense of suspense for the audience as it would have looked like an unfair battle between my character and the zombie, as opposed to my younger, smaller brother.
Also I should have edited the pace of the news report scenes to be much quicker and made each clip shorter than the last to build up suspense more quickly, rather than the repetitive and tedious scene I produced in the final cut. Furthermore, on editing criticisms, I should not have made the TV static footage so loud, as it made my classmates cringe and cover their ears when I presented the finished film to the class.
However I was overjoyed when people stated in their feedback that I had an excellent selection of props costumes and location, and that they even found it scary. I personally believed that my location especially worked well to portray the story and to convey the right emotions to the audience. Shots of the Donnigton locations for example were perfect as they depicted deserted urban landscape in broad daylight, like in ‘I am Legend’. I felt that the daylight helped to emphasise the absence of life.
On the whole, with what I had to make do with I was extremely pleased my Film, and from the whole experience I have improved on my filming and editing skills compared my project from last year.
Wednesday, 24 February 2010
Evaluation of Planning and its Affect in My Film
Although my story boards were to general on the scenes, rather than being specifying what each shot would display, I found it was sufficient enough as a guideline when I went out to film on location. I listed the different types shots that each scene would require, what music would be played alongside it and how it would be edited later on.
I had to carefully select which news reports I was going to incorporate into my film, as they were purposed to give the audience a gist of the storyline, when the actual reports where on entirely different subjects. I felt that I had chosen the appropriate clips and had edited them perfectly, so they were not misleading.
I decided to choose props that would look authentic and represent traditional horror film props. I decided to use a sawn off shotgun as one of the major weapons, as it is the stereotypical weapon used in almost every zombie film in the last few decades, which I decide to pay homage to. Also I chose short barrel gun after Terminator 2 inspired me, as if this choice of weapon would make my character to appear as macho as Arnold Schwarzenegger.
I originally choose I crowbar as my character’s melee weapon during my early planning as I felt it gave my character a more raw and gritty impression.
However I later changed it to a survival knife, as it was simple to make a fake knife that resembled my real one, and also because it was more practical, both to carry around and when using it with actors.
In the end I felt the knife worked just as well, and the fact I used both a fake (and real) survival knife, gave my character a more deadly look, and come across as a more professional survivor.
I also wrote my own short script for my radio news report, covering the zombie outbreak, read out by my friend in a North American accent. I felt this choice worked well in my film, as I played the report over a black screen, helping to build suspense, as the audience could not see what was happening, also the decision of an American reporter, aided in giving my film a Hollywood feel to it.
I had to carefully select which news reports I was going to incorporate into my film, as they were purposed to give the audience a gist of the storyline, when the actual reports where on entirely different subjects. I felt that I had chosen the appropriate clips and had edited them perfectly, so they were not misleading.
I decided to choose props that would look authentic and represent traditional horror film props. I decided to use a sawn off shotgun as one of the major weapons, as it is the stereotypical weapon used in almost every zombie film in the last few decades, which I decide to pay homage to. Also I chose short barrel gun after Terminator 2 inspired me, as if this choice of weapon would make my character to appear as macho as Arnold Schwarzenegger.
I originally choose I crowbar as my character’s melee weapon during my early planning as I felt it gave my character a more raw and gritty impression.
However I later changed it to a survival knife, as it was simple to make a fake knife that resembled my real one, and also because it was more practical, both to carry around and when using it with actors.
In the end I felt the knife worked just as well, and the fact I used both a fake (and real) survival knife, gave my character a more deadly look, and come across as a more professional survivor.
I also wrote my own short script for my radio news report, covering the zombie outbreak, read out by my friend in a North American accent. I felt this choice worked well in my film, as I played the report over a black screen, helping to build suspense, as the audience could not see what was happening, also the decision of an American reporter, aided in giving my film a Hollywood feel to it.
Evalaution: Screenshot analysis

I used it because I wanted to give the impression of a mass panic outbreak in the cities. I felt it achieved this with the sheer amount of chaos, occurring in the clip. The main reason I choose this video is because of the extreme violence the police are using, and its appears as if they are trying to contain an evacuation, or an infected mob.
I am pleased with using this video clip in my film as I feel it displays what I intended and helps to give a hint of the storyline and setting of the outbreak of the infection. It managed to achieve the desired affect on the class when I presented it to them, as it seemed to grab their attention, which I feel is crucial at the beginning of a film.


As I was impressed by its effectiveness, I wanted to recreate my own shot that looked as similar to it as possible to build up tension as the zombie in my film is lurching forward towards my vulnerable character.I accompanied this shot with the strings segment of ‘The last Spartan’ score from the Halo 2 soundtrack. The brief section I used is composed of a string orchestra and choir which both build up in noise to quickly create a spine-chilling sensation to play alongside the zombie lurching towards my character, making the overall scene even more eerie.
Thursday, 11 February 2010
Evaluation of Research
I began my research by studying the history of short films, and their significance within the industry. The main thing I gathered was that modern short films are deliberately different than mainstream feature movies, in their topics and how they are made, so from this point I wanted to make my own production which included aspects from typical feature films but still retained distinctive elements.
I then started to look at an overview of the ‘Zombie Apocalypse’ sub genre, noting what aspects they included to make them fit into that category. I could then incorporate them into my own short so my audience would recognise it as an apocalypse film.
The first popular media about zombies I looked at for inspiration was Michael Jackson’s ‘Thriller’ video. However, I did not find it particularly useful for my own project because it wasn’t really scary or realistic. I then decided to look at the depiction of zombies in popular culture throughout history. I took particular note on the novel ‘I am Legend’ and the Romero’s film ‘Night of the Living Dead’ which together formed the zombie stereotype of western culture.
I also looked at more recent production such as ’28 Days Later’, the TV series ‘Dead Set’ and the film adaptation of ‘I am Legend’. All of these have aimed to defy the common stereotype, the most notable new feature is that the zombies and infected people in these productions are capable of sprinting, as opposed to the traditional shambling monster.
I found all of these extremely useful, for the concept of my own zombies, thus helping me to formulate which costumes to use and how the actors should act.
The final part of my research involved me searching for a suitable location to shoot my film, I considered many different Brownfield sites across Telford each with their own advantages. I also had to bear in mind accessibility to certain locations, as it was difficult to arrange my cast and crew to meet up at locations that where awkward to get to. However, even though I settled on using the Lightmoor location for my fight scene, I still used footage of each of my considerations in my final film.
I then started to look at an overview of the ‘Zombie Apocalypse’ sub genre, noting what aspects they included to make them fit into that category. I could then incorporate them into my own short so my audience would recognise it as an apocalypse film.
The first popular media about zombies I looked at for inspiration was Michael Jackson’s ‘Thriller’ video. However, I did not find it particularly useful for my own project because it wasn’t really scary or realistic. I then decided to look at the depiction of zombies in popular culture throughout history. I took particular note on the novel ‘I am Legend’ and the Romero’s film ‘Night of the Living Dead’ which together formed the zombie stereotype of western culture.
I also looked at more recent production such as ’28 Days Later’, the TV series ‘Dead Set’ and the film adaptation of ‘I am Legend’. All of these have aimed to defy the common stereotype, the most notable new feature is that the zombies and infected people in these productions are capable of sprinting, as opposed to the traditional shambling monster.
I found all of these extremely useful, for the concept of my own zombies, thus helping me to formulate which costumes to use and how the actors should act.
The final part of my research involved me searching for a suitable location to shoot my film, I considered many different Brownfield sites across Telford each with their own advantages. I also had to bear in mind accessibility to certain locations, as it was difficult to arrange my cast and crew to meet up at locations that where awkward to get to. However, even though I settled on using the Lightmoor location for my fight scene, I still used footage of each of my considerations in my final film.
Evaluation: Audiences Review
After presenting my finished production to my media class, I happily received positive comments from everyone in the room. However, after carefully reading my classmate’s feedback, it intrigued me how certain sections were disappointing to some viewers but praised by others. For example one persons feedback who liked the music, felt the fight scene looked too amateur, whilst another despised the music but was thrilled by the final battle.
On the other hand I found common positive trends, as everyone thought the props and costumes I used where up to standard and in some reviews regarded as excellent, which I am pleased about. Also, I was satisfied when the main ‘scary scene’ of my short, made several people jump, which I was trying to achieve.
One negative trend I noticed on practically every feedback sheet was that the TV static was far too loud, which I will admit myself, as I used it repetitively, it became tedious, and made me cringe let alone my classmates. On the whole I am pleased with my classmates opinions and agree with the majority of criticisms, which I will try to eradicate when making another production.
On the other hand I found common positive trends, as everyone thought the props and costumes I used where up to standard and in some reviews regarded as excellent, which I am pleased about. Also, I was satisfied when the main ‘scary scene’ of my short, made several people jump, which I was trying to achieve.
One negative trend I noticed on practically every feedback sheet was that the TV static was far too loud, which I will admit myself, as I used it repetitively, it became tedious, and made me cringe let alone my classmates. On the whole I am pleased with my classmates opinions and agree with the majority of criticisms, which I will try to eradicate when making another production.
Finishing Touches to Print Text 1

The reason I am using this logo for inspiration is firstly because the 'Left 4 Dead' franchise is a popular Zombie series, but because I liked the shear contrast of
bright colours. The use is white writing against a dark background, with blood splattered across looks admirable to me because of how bold it is, with the blood giving a hint of the films horror content, which is more subtle opposed to the whole poster being bright red like the '28 Days later Poster'.

It made realize that when I come to making the real thing on photoshop I need to edit the image to be darker to suit the topic of the film, and that I should use the font 'Impact' for the title to make it more bold and intimidating.


I also added several fake reviews and fake Warner Brothers logo to make it come across as more profesional.
Wednesday, 10 February 2010
Inspiration For Film Poster (Print Text 1)


I always thought the 'I Am Legend' poster was captivating and appropriately advertised the film's content. I feel it has many features I wanted to incorporate into my own poster. The fact its the protagonist being the only person in the poster helps to establish who and what the film is about, and what kind of audience it is aimed at; obviously a male audience.
I feel I need to edit the colour of the still from my own film to a lighter more yellow colour as the sepia tone in the 'I Am Legend' poster gives a sense of death, like plants that turn yellow when they lose life, and the lack of diverse bright colours makes it seem more serious.

However, I really like the use of two massive eyeballs, which represent the infected humans positioned towards the top of poster, as they give the notion that the characters in the bottom of the photo are being watched and are therefore, unsafe.
Also, the diverse proportions of the eyes compared to the human figures at the bottom creates a more threatening feel, as if, whatever is hostile towards the protagonists is more dangerous and numerous in numbers than them.

Again, I want to incorporate a similar feature into my own poster, so I used this screenshot (pictured to the right) where one of the zombies is pouncing from the darkness onto a survivor. This is the main scary scene within the film, which is intended to shock and frighten the audience through its surprise. I am using this image to insert in my poster above the screenshot of myself walking in the empty streets, as it will look like some giant menace, similar to the yellow eyes in the '28 Days Later' poster, posing as a watching threat, that looks as if it will pounce on the character positioned below at any moment.
Target Audience
My film is targeted at young adolesant males, typical fans of both action and horror movies, although unlike typical horror films, I do not want my feature to be rated as an 18. This would result in limiting my potential target audience. Here I may have to alter and re-plan some of my scenes to fit the rating criteria of a 15, as I believe my film will appeal to boys around that age as well.
As I mentioned when looking at BBFC ratings, I feel that the subject of an apocalypse and such a focus on death is too disturbing for a younger audience and would be suited to more mature audience.
I believe my film is fitting for a premdominatly male audience, as males are typically stereotyped to enjoy violence and action. This is possibly due to males leading lifestyles that involve active elements such as contact sports. Males are also naturally more aggressive and engage in fighting each other far more when compared to similar aged females.
On the other hand, horror sometimes appeals to a wide range of female audiences, so perhaps some teenage girls will enjoy the horror elements in my short film.
Although my audience is mainly young males, my film should be enjoyed by males from both well educated backgounds as well as less financially disadvantaged lifestyles as elements such as the classical music is more suitable for intellectuals, whilst working class audiences may relate to the setting of urban decay backdrops.
However, I would say my target audience is more swayed to the more educated males as I feel the television and radio news reports at the beginning of my film are appropriate for those with a taste for intellectual media such as news broadcasts and newspapers.
As I mentioned when looking at BBFC ratings, I feel that the subject of an apocalypse and such a focus on death is too disturbing for a younger audience and would be suited to more mature audience.
I believe my film is fitting for a premdominatly male audience, as males are typically stereotyped to enjoy violence and action. This is possibly due to males leading lifestyles that involve active elements such as contact sports. Males are also naturally more aggressive and engage in fighting each other far more when compared to similar aged females.
On the other hand, horror sometimes appeals to a wide range of female audiences, so perhaps some teenage girls will enjoy the horror elements in my short film.
Although my audience is mainly young males, my film should be enjoyed by males from both well educated backgounds as well as less financially disadvantaged lifestyles as elements such as the classical music is more suitable for intellectuals, whilst working class audiences may relate to the setting of urban decay backdrops.
However, I would say my target audience is more swayed to the more educated males as I feel the television and radio news reports at the beginning of my film are appropriate for those with a taste for intellectual media such as news broadcasts and newspapers.
Props
For a more authentic prop, I felt plastic toy guns would appear unrealistic, and shotgun and BB guns seemed too expensive just to use for this film.
I chose to resort to this real 19th century pistol that belonged to my family, which has been deactivated, which will look truly authentic as it is made of the same materials that would be used for a real shotgun as well as it bearing a resemblance to a sawn off shotgun.
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